viernes, 5 de febrero de 2010

WORDS OF LOVE




MY LIFE DID NOT MAKE SENSE

UNTIL YOU CAME YOUR LOVE

THAT ME OF THE STRENGTH

THAT I NEED TO BE ABLE TO

CONTINUE FORWARD.

I LOVE YOU

1 comentario:

  1. hey mony your poem is beauty but
    when you write the second line you make a mistake
    and the correct way of write that is "until your love came"
    and in the third line is "that make me strenght"

    thank you you do it very well please still working in your english you can do it
    go a head!

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